As long as we both agree, it's a mess.
After admitting some worry about the current pace of this scene, I saw some interesting comments and a lot of encouragement, which I really appreciate! It's always been the battle of writing a long-form story in 1 page instalments, and I feel the same way when I read comics online and then do a binge and/or pick up the book. I hope you'll trust me to tell this story right, and that the action payoff for this scene will be big.
If you're looking for more comics to read, I'd like to spotlight a comic I think you'd enjoy! Fairmeadow is about a remote pacifist commune living in the shadow of a century-long war. When they take in a wounded Orcish soldier, they fall into turmoil as their utopian vision is tested. If you're into aggressive female leads and anthro characters, take a look!
If you'd like a peek at the pages to come, check out spoilers on the GODSLAVE Patreon!